In my last entry, I drew attention to the merits of narrative history and how crucial it is that historians concentrate on telling a good story in their writing if they are to have impact. Today, I’d like to elaborate on that theme, focusing on one aspect of historical writing that seems to unnecessarily impede storytelling among historians—the excessive use of quotes.
Quoting the exact words of historical characters in a narrative can significantly add to its value. It can give a unique first-hand perspective to the tale being told, and of course can demonstrate careful research and command of available resources by the historian. But there are limits to the effectiveness of quotes. In my opinion, they should only be used for impact or when attempting to rephrase their wording will detract from their meaning.
I have read several carefully-researched books lately whose authors unfortunately have missed this simple rule of good writing. Rather than transform their research into a smooth narrative, their paragraphs were filled with dry quotations, making the story halting, difficult to read, and ironically, less interesting. Often the quotes were of such mundane phrases that they seemed to be placed in the text for no other reason than to show the source from which they came had actually been consulted. Consequently when a really dynamic quote did appear, it was lost in the jumble of quotation marks.
A crucial part of the historian’s task is to explain why their research is important through weaving a compelling story that people will want to read. To simply regurgitate facts found in research, however thorough, is only half the job.
JMB